intro
talking about digitalization and streo types people have about it.
Body# 1
The addaction
what makes people so addicted ? and why ? what good and whats bad about it ? Is there even a good or a bad?
Body #2
Staying connected
digital things are used to help people stay connected. with out being together and why it that ?
Body#3
social networking
why does every one use them and why do they spend so much time on them?
Rap it up, talk about each subject i already talked bout .
hey Brittani
ReplyDeletefor one your topic seems like interesting. I think it will cover a lot. if it were me i would try and narrow down your thesis a little. You say that digitalization is affecting society in a major way, what exactly about the addiction is affecting people, in other words quickly summarize the rest of the paper. another thing you may want to add is how it is affecting people. This can be as broad as its good or its bad.
your first argument seems like something that is interesting and I think it is a good place to express what you think. in the section, Video Games of everything bad is good for you may be a good place to find some quotes and evidence on why people play games and are so obsessed when much of the activity and game includes
work.
for your second argument a good place for evidence might be some of the things said in class, i think we spent a few days talking about this.
your third argument is also interesting, today in class actually we mentioned how we as a people are much more likely to go on facebook that nytimes.com.
all in all i think your arguments are interesting and i can;t wait to read your paper.
evan