Friday, January 22, 2010

Julie

I think you paper was very good, i feel that you stated facts and got a little personal as well. you had images to prove your points , do i wasn't like you mad a statement with out backing it up and i thought that was a very good idea. I think you should add some of the info from class. you don't have to add every thing that andy said but you should add some. i think a good place to add is where you talked about tattoos you should talk about what fanning said when he came in to talk to use. So you can have what you know that fact you got from other place then what some who has many tattoos had to say I think it would back up your point to the fullest but over all great paper and think think there are very little changes that need to be made.

by the way i think you blog back grand is hot .....

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